Friday, 23 November 2012

Feedback

Notes -

 Stewart gave us feedback for us to improve our original storyboard. These are the feedbacks.


 - We should  start with  slight pan and the first should be a wide shot

-Second shot more to the characters level

 -Angle camera more to the side, so show all the mirror and a little bit of the characters face

 - Show him in a different angle brushing his teeth

 - So as he is picking out what to wear he peeks throughout the window, shot 8, shot 9, shot 10 should not be included, but still include the shots for backup.

 -We should show a hint of our character wearing a super hero gadget or costume. e.g. as he wears his suit he puts on his superhero costume underneath.

 - Aso need  a lot of people with suits for the board meeting

 -And for the 4th shot a long shot of him getting up from bed

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